Jump scare draft one

Here is the first draft of a jumpscare I planning on including in my horror teaser trailer, from some verbal feedback I have gathered that the jumpscare is not at all "scary" and it also does not seem to fit in with the themes present in my narrative.

To combat this piece of criticizing I will be researching into ways of making my jump scare more authentic and "scary", in addition to this I will also be reaching into ways I can incorporate my jumpscare into my narrative,